There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
There is no denying that modern society introduces a wide variety of music genres. In fact, the art of music production has always been respectfully handled since the beginning of humanity, and I would personally side with those who strongly promote traditional music.
Without a doubt, music has always been an essential bond between humans and culture. It is such a powerful tool for spreading messages in the most persuasive manner, which can be explained by its usage in political opinions, and global conflicts. Moreover, music is considered a very effective means of learning a language. To be more specific, there are a significant number of well-known compositions for children, one of which is the “ABC” song. Finally, music is the primary element of making our life meaningful and worthwhile. One of the sole reasons for this is the fact that music reflects deeply personalities, personal struggles, and relationships. As a result, people tend to listen to music for consolation and motivation to achieve success in life.
Personally, while I do think that international genres are a considerable contribution to the diversity of the music industry, tradition is something that is ought to be nominated. This is due to the fact that traditional music primarily illustrates the sole history and culture of a country, which should be respected by future generations, whereas modern-styled music is essentially just commercial products that are popularized to fulfill entertainment. Moreover, since traditional music is linguistically native, it becomes apparent that the messages from native materials would become much more meaningful and powerful. In comparison, most music artists only take the beats and vibes into account when they compose modern-styled materials, instead of working on developing a message.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that music is such a crucial element of our culture and intellect. In other words, it is a flexible tool for manifesting a message and formalizing our history, but I do think that those factors are more emphasized in traditional compositions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40606060606 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19960396998 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9767244489 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.933333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332644168563 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118842462715 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535855832626 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209427767669 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501175594971 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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