There are many types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is traditional music of a country more important than international music or not?
It is certainly true that, is like a magic.Nowadays the world has seen numerous kinds of music. Music can inspire us and it works as like a remady for wounds . Both music such as, international music as well as traditional music are popular in whole world whereas, in my opinion, while I believe that traditional music more fruitful with the comparison of second one .
There are multifarious benefits of listening to music. Firstly, it gives a relaxation in huge ammount .After doing their work they feel frustrated and lazy then music help to reducing all types of burden and people get to a more positive. Secondly, music plays a vital role to change the mood swings. Most of the time our mood is badly effected and nothing shown any interest in other works but despite of this, if they listen to music then automatically changed their face expression and sometimes after happiness is showed on their faces.
On the other hand, traditional music such a great influence on a life of people. First of all, culture is prevented by to this music. Now, mostly new generations do not know about to their custom or ethics , with the help of traditional music people interduce to their children about the culture as well as due to this can prevent the beauty of the music. Second of all, this music is very beneficial for the wedding purposes because without to this marriages does not consider in a proper way especially in Punjab.
To sum up, admittedly, music is a crucial part of our life however , traditional music such a back bone bone of human life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, while, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70588235294 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62463928168 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7267795386 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452007153721 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190873445688 0.084324248473 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089317124047 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288223769357 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915849246181 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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