There are more new towns being built now a days. It is important to inclined public park and sports facilities than shopping centre for individuals to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In this highly sophisticated scenario, day by day, new buildings are constructed in a significant amount. I strongly believe that these things which are included playing field as well as municipal parks are crucial role play every person who utilised their spare of time as compare to the shopping complex.
There are multifarious reasons behind to choosing both sports facilities and public park. Firstly, most of the people encouraged towards the sports. The trend of the games is demolishing with the changing of time period if , provided the sports facilities then all do participating copiously and people know about the various kinds of games. Secondly, individuals become to a more healthier because garden gives great deal of opportunities to each person. Every one go to there and do lots of activities such as joga and exercise. Due to this they keep fit their body.
Moving to the another reason, garden is a relaxing source. Since people have a hectic schedule and they feel more frustrated during their work as well as anger however, with the help of this method they notice some changes in their life because the surrounding of the garden is very impressive and gives a deep influence on the person's mind. Lastly, proper sanitation are preferred to there.The environment of the garden is consider in a hygienic condition therefore, it far away from any types of pollution.
According to my perception, both sports facilities and public parks are more cherished in any aspects with the comparison of shopping malls.
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Suggestion: considered
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0753968254 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76178540778 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.411614462 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.583333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176492831787 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057721383124 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534797775593 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110787102682 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05421807481 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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