There are serious concerns about the sale and production of genetically modified food. Yet it is necessary if we are to meet the demands of an increasing world population.
Many are of concerns about the GMF (genetically modified food) market whereas others believe GMF is essential supplying the increasingly dense population. Personally, I strongly believe in GM food's importance but concerns about it should be raised as well. This essay will point out why GM food is important and why worries are necessary.
GMF has undeniably solved a number of problems faced by all nations worldwide. The extension of food demands and requirements for clean, safe and nutritious products as world population increases are no longer left insoluble. Japan, for instance, is world-renowned for maximizing the benefits of using GMF, resulting in health risks significantly mitigated and overall longevity prolonged. Generally, food having purposeful genetic modifications supplies nutrition and meets the world's high standards.
Awareness of using GM food safely is no redundancy because of the complex producing and trading process. As requiring high quality equipment and well-qualified biologists, the procedure of yielding GMF has to tackle several problems, which, therefore, may increase fake products in the market sold at extravagant prices. China's food market has been affirmed to be unstably insecure as all kinds of products, including more or less poisonous ones are claimed GMF. Apart from expensive price, there products can be unhealthy and harmful to consumers.
To conclude, while GM food should be highly valued for its benefits, considerations should be taken carefully before buying and eating it. If GM food is produced, processed and used properly, a fundamentally positive difference will be witnessed in the distant future.
- There are serious concerns about the sale and production of genetically modified food Yet it is necessary if we are to meet the demands of an increasing world population 61
- There are serious concerns about the sale and production of genetically modified food Yet it is necessary if we are to meet the demands of an increasing world population 61
- There are serious concerns about the sale and production of genetically modified food Yet it is necessary if we are to meet the demands of an increasing world population 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, apart from, as to, for instance, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63888888889 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06384928833 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68253968254 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2984128031 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217017934681 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762464510998 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720727704386 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124781916725 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694223333865 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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