There is evidence that inhaling cigarette smoke causes health problems not only for smokers but for non-smokers who inhale other people's smoke. In view of this, smoking should be banned in all public places, even though this would restrict some people's freedom of action. What are your views?
Nowadays, second-hand smoking has been a serious problem as well as direct smoking. There are a lot of proves to support the idea that inhaling cigarette smokes causes the same health problem as smoking cigarettes. The government now takes a role in banning the smoke of cigarettes in all public places but critics argue that it can take away people’s freedom. In my opinion, cigarettes are the thing that we should get risks, especially in public spaces.
First of all, the health of the community should be put in first. Smoking is dangerous to humans because it can cause lung cancer and there is no exception in inhaling smoke. Public spaces include supermarkets and cinemas, where children often come up, should ban cigarette smoking. Children are vulnerable to the effect of smoking than adults because their respiratory systems are not fully developed.
Secondly, in some cultural, smoking is considered a criminal offense. In Singapore, smoking in public areas and prohibited spaces can be charged at 30000 dollars or even going to prison. Thanks to strict rules that have been applied by the government, Singapore now has the least citizens die per year because of smoking. These rules can save thousands of innocent people who have the consciousness to get away from smoking.
To conclude, smoking should be banned in public spaces, and the government, as well as the individuals, need to be aware of the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08050847458 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6908447833 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.6127402426 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.2307692308 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356540301764 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124664690807 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750401695983 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220684071135 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669770224195 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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