There have been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvements in people’s lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is convinced that despite the growth of technology significantly, it drives mankind's life improvement. In this essay, I totally agree with this point of view because it has more merit rather than demerit for some reasons.
Regarding to this issue, the main benefit of advanced technology for human life is to help people easy to communicate and get information. It can be seen that many people are able to use many things without having stayed at home, office, and other places which are extremely important given the busy lifestyle of today. A case in point that we can see, many people recently have smartphones, laptops, and WI-FI which is available virtually in many places. As a result, they are able to work, study, and communicate easily and conveniently whenever and wherever they live in such a coffee shop or while traveling on a train or bus. There is no doubt that that has enhanced people's lives in many ways and this would not have been possible without improved technology.
However, there are some drawbacks of this case. Firstly, it makes most people addicted to technology since they spend the whole time in their daily life. For instance, in Indonesia, young people like to play online games due to the fact that they do not go to work, study, or even stay at home. Therefore, they forget what they have to do and tend to waste their time to be addictive of the advanced technology. Secondly, improper use of technology via mobile devices can cause problems in work and study by encouraging distraction and delays. It is clearly because most people have social media which can be difficult to concentrate on doing the work and study. Another example is when children are studying, they tend to open their mobile phone that drives them to scroll more and more. Thus, their homework or what they have to desire would burn daylight. it is important the role of parents should be involved for the growth and development of children, especially in teaching and learning activities.
To sum up, from where I stand, I believe that there are many good people that have taken the advantage of technology in a positive way rather than negative way. It is crystally clear that people should embrace technology wisely while the young generation have to be accompanied by their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, no doubt, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88607594937 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57526473656 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541772151899 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2372443103 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.222222222 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9444444444 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225685795928 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716678320847 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492888886939 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130811094667 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327615956839 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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