There is a moral necessity today for the richer countries of the world top help the poorer countries develop in terms of feeding the population, education and health care.
Gulnoza, [31.03.20 00:38]
With the remarkable development of human civilization, people enjoy better living standard and the qualification of citizens has improved greatly. In this day and age, disputation as to whether opulent countries should assist to less-afluent ones in the field of provisioning, schooling along with medicament has been a highly long-running controversy for a certain period of time now. Yet when it comes to whether the burgeoning of this is a blessing or a curse, people hold divergent views. This essay will display a further deliberation with the prototypes on outlooks and its influence on society.
It is widely accepted that the times we are dwelling in is defined as an fastest growing era on account of the emulations emanated amid countries on Earth. On the other hand, it render some countries to become full-fledged ones as a result of fuerce competition in the world. In stark contrast, there remained some countries which is not capable of ameliorating its political together with economical status.
Needless to say, the countries fully advanced with its cutting-edge technologies should give a helping hand to indigent nations which are virtually in need of gratuity. As we know, there are an escalating number of countries which are suffer from the deficit of sustenance, poor standards of education and the tardy medicine. Consequently, this matters generate miscellaneous problems related to famine and droughts. Thereupon, the children of other less-afluent countries vegetate in atmosphere of combination of nescience and predicament in relation to enlightened people of well-heeled countries.
With the above-presented demonstration, I would like to draw my conclusion as follows. I once again reaffirm my position and accentuate that it is an ideal strategy if prosperous countries bolster impecunious countries with the aid of unification together with economic and social circumstances since the world would be a better place to lead an indiscribable life with the sensation of coalescence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 181, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...eatly. In this day and age, disputation as to whether opulent countries should assist to less...
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Line 2, column 367, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... long-running controversy for a certain period of time now. Yet when it comes to whether the b...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... times we are dwelling in is defined as an fastest growing era on account of the e...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... times we are dwelling in is defined as an fastest growing era on account of the e...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'renders'?
Suggestion: renders
...untries on Earth. On the other hand, it render some countries to become full-fledged o...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...meliorating its political together with economical status. Needless to say, the countries...
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Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
...scalating number of countries which are suffer from the deficit of sustenance, poor st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, so, well, as to, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49206349206 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27685486065 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606349206349 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8745922067 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.076923077 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154013633556 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503115222822 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384223065799 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752166206641 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459537833213 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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