There is no need to complete an education beyond a primary school level Do you agree or not

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There is no need to complete an education beyond a primary school level. Do you agree or not?

there are a number of reason why it is necessary to continue an education after complishing a primary school level. first, since education is the foundation for future career, a well educated person would contribute knowledge for job. in fact, if just completing basic school level, society would create manual person, which resuts a burden for country. second, by well educating, one person would develop psychological lessons to become a better personality. this means that, the age of graduating from primary school have been not fully psychologically so it is easy to be attracted by bad factors and become the worm of society in the future

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 539.0 1615.20841683 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 106.0 315.596192385 34% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08490566038 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2086804361 4.20363070211 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84212890088 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 176.041082164 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.72641509434 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 175.5 506.74238477 35% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4042250378 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.8 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195196227311 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105473231637 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890748703115 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195196227311 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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