There should be strict laws banning people from taking photographs of people under 18 in order to protect young celebrities and the children of celebrities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There should be hard rules of stopping humans from taking images of people under 18 for protect adolescent famous persons and their children. I strongly agree with this argument. Regulations must be very strict to protect their privacy and let them enjoy their time.
It is true, normal people like to follow and see well-known persons and their families’ photos and they believe they have right about their fame but on my opinion being famous is a choice and it is not their family’s choice, it is true about their children. Young children do not choose to be famous and they are well-known because of their parents so, it is not a good reason to take pictures of them without their permission some of them do not like to be under spot light. For example, Angelina Joli’s children had their own privacy and she did not let any paparazzi or reporter took pics of them due to she said they should live in a convenience and positive atmosphere. On point of my view, good vibes instead of stressful or being worry about their behavior help them to live in peace and grow their own characters healthy and nice.
Lots of people think taking photos of children would give them lots of ideas about how to dress or they like to see how much babies are look like their parent. In my view, children need to be just a child and have their own childhood. Sometimes they are in a bad mood and do not like to dress well or they like to play in a park freely with peers.
To sum up, children have their own rights and we should respect them because it was not their choice and they want just to be a child.
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Suggestion:
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...hoice and they want just to be a child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, well, for example, in my view, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41554054054 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2120072714 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493243243243 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0194775086 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.818181818 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163551687452 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810760412966 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715430618154 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125315431737 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723656616268 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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