There is too much noise in many public places in cities What are the causes of this problem What can be done to solve the problem

It is undeniable fact that there is plenty of growth in population of metropolitan areas , which leads to increase in pollution . One of the major challenge in urban areas is incline in the level of noise pollution. This essay will cover the factors causing this problem and solutions to tackle those issues.

First and foremost, most of the people prefer use of privet vehicles to commute this leads to traffic congestion which cause unnecessary noise in urban cities.For instance, more than 70% of public in india prefer privet transportation rather than public transports.Additionally another vital effecting factor is public gatherings like marriage functions and political rallies.These gatherings incudes the execcive use of loud speakers which cause tremendous increase in noise level.

To conquer this problems government should implement some rules to enhance the use of public transportation and reduce privet vehicles.To exemplify higher authorities of delhi has divided weekdays to use odd and even number plated vehicles. This caused 40% growth in public transportation users. Moreover, higher authorities of urban areas should grt more traffic officers working at public places ,also they should put some strict restrictions on the usage of loud speakers at public places like hospitals and schools.

To conclude, the main factor causing the noise pollution is uncontrollable traffic in cities , this can be resolved by deducting the use of personal commute and banning loud speakers in public places. It is recommended for government to organise awareness programs to inform people about reducing noise levels.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, for instance, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58064516129 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05230769689 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568548387097 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.801912668 49.4020404114 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.777777778 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226930854781 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963857216291 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638831218713 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138587029672 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233781886611 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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