There is a trend of increasing competitiveness in today’s society. In your opinion, is it a good or a bad development?
These days witness an upward trend in competitiveness as more competitions are held in the community. While some pessimists suppose that the phenomenon affects the society negatively, I am of the opinion that it is a good development.
On the one hand, there are many downsides of the increase in competitiveness. Firstly, when more competitions are held, the standard to achieve success is likely to rise. Some competitors may find it impossible to complete the target so they tend to not make an effort to reach success. As a consequence, their productivity may be comparatively low which can affect the business growth. Moreover, when the standards are rising, some people may encounter stress and anxiety so they push themselves too hard in working and studying. This action can have a detrimental effect on one's health as they may suffer strain because of lacking exercise and relaxation.
On the other hand, more competitiveness also has many benefits to our community. Firstly, it activates a sense of excitement within one competitor. To explain, when one witnesses others' achievement, he is fed a constant supply of ambition so he tends to work hard to accomplish goals. It is considered a motivation to make one try his best to gain more product. As a result, competitiveness can boost the world's progress so the living standard of humans can become better. A student, for instance, when encountering a competition may study hard to gain the award so education can be improved.
In conclusion, the growth of competitiveness can lead to one's health problems or the inefficiency of a company. However, I reckon that its benefits outweigh its drawbacks since it betters humans' living standard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e growth of competitiveness can lead to ones health problems or the inefficiency of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12903225806 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20725850387 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587813620072 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3043577581 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.4375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112230378242 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396196413748 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513942092712 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889329860863 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881504315222 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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