There is a view that: Writer must put the reader in the heart when writing, must listen to the voice of the reader. There is another viewpoint that: Writers must keep their thoughts while writing, not affected by the reader. If you are a writer who can create your life and your life is a "work", how will you treat your readers? Based on the above point of view, choose an angle and write an essay on 800 words, without any form (except poetry)
"If each of us is the" author "of life, then our hearts must listen to the reader.
Why? Because the work needs to be conveyed, but if you want to convey, you need to have the reader. Whether the work is considered good or not, it needs to be readable, sympathetic, the more it needs to be praised.
In this world, there are many great writers, their hearts always bring readers, their works are received extremely warmly, famous everywhere, is a masterpiece of literature, a classic product of literature. chemistry. Wanderers in "Water Margin" wore ripped pants, ate without meals, but when faced with unjust oppression, they stood up to fight from despair, using their swords and sticks to speak. His spirit of protest. The ugly, beautiful fairies in "Liao Trai Chi Di" are ugly and beautiful. But whether joy or sorrow, separation or reunion, the love story that transcends the life of their deaths has taken away the tears of the young men and women who suffer for love? How many domestic and foreign authors such as Ivan Sergeyevich Turgenev, Lev Tolstoy, so many good examples can not be counted.
For us, every high school student who knows how to read and write, if our life was a "work", then we must be worthy of "readers". These "readers" are closely related to our lives and destiny. They are parents, teachers, friends, and relatives who appear and disappear from our lives. Facing them, we should respect, empathize, love; Facing ourselves, we should persevere, be diligent and strive. Only acts of decency, honest and industrious, we can write an outstanding "work of life".
Allow me to speak as a "writer"! Although my "readers" are just like me, being one of the many civilians no less, who can always be looked down upon, forgotten, I would still be careful to place them in my heart. this.
I understand their little joys. The morning dew glittered on the green leaves of the early morning, the cool shade of the ocean, which was printed in the afternoon water, the gentle and kind smile of her father, the appreciating eyes of her teacher, they looked and felt everything. things things. I understand their unspeakable pain. At noon sun, working hard in the middle of the sand site; pushing and pushing, running through wastewater markets along the ground; falling bedridden, afraid of running out of money; Three land and sky, and poverty still cling to it forever.
Now, life has changed a lot, but every village, every town, everywhere needs to be built. For example: Is our country road convenient? Is the old alley affordable now bustling? Are hills and mountains far away still as green as ever? Is the small river beside the village pristine or not? Besides, the ancient towers, rice mortar, black tile, white walls, are they still the same, still harbouring nostalgic feelings of their homeland?
I speak for the people, I sing for them. Those who only wrote for themselves, have lost the meaning of poetry. "Flowers in the corner of the wall, you show yourself, your world is so small."
The last thing I want to say is that each of us is the "highest privileged author" of his life's work, and also the "first reader" of that work. So think about it, aren't you just a small ordinary person?
I want to be a writer, I want to cheer and speak for thousands of little beings! "
- Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- There is a view that Writer must put the reader in the heart when writing must listen to the voice of the reader There is another viewpoint that Writers must keep their thoughts while writing not affected by the reader If you are a writer who can create y 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Chemistry
...ature, a classic product of literature. chemistry. Wanderers in 'Water Margin' ...
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Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... how to read and write, if our life was a 'work', then we must be worth...
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Line 6, column 22, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... of life'. Allow me to speak as a 'writer'! Although my 'r...
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Line 6, column 234, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...l be careful to place them in my heart. this. I understand their little joys. The m...
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Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Things
...acher, they looked and felt everything. things things. I understand their unspeakable ...
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Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: things
...acher, they looked and felt everything. things things. I understand their unspeakable pain. A...
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Line 10, column 184, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...' of that work. So think about it, arent you just a small ordinary person? I wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, so, still, then, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2869.0 1615.20841683 178% => OK
No of words: 578.0 315.596192385 183% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96366782007 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90322654589 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8985414825 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 350.0 176.041082164 199% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60553633218 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 841.5 506.74238477 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 5.43587174349 405% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2813433398 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106909643947 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0260210969734 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346179295693 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0510888050678 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376432920922 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 78.4519038076 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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