Nowadays some of universities started to use the internet for online lesson. Some of students like this way of teaching. However, the against students do not like it. It is good idea and necessary if we could not go to university. For example, now we live in a major crisis where there is a circulating virus it's name"covid19" or "corona".
So, this thing make all of universities and school in all over the world started use the online lessons. Now I will talk about advantages and disadvantages of it.
Firstly, it helps us not to stop us from learning. And it is also easy to do it just open your phone or computer and your books to see your teachers teach you the lesson. this way it is more comfortable than going to the university, because you will be staying at home in which place you want and take your lesson. this thing will be our environmental very good. because we decline the rate of using cars, buses and any machines that produce smoke that is harmful to the environment.
In the other hand, people do not like it because may be this way don't make them focus with the teacher. the reason of this, the internet started to be slow. So this thing make them fell boring. In addition some of student how do not interested in lesson, they will leave the phone open and play in another thing. So this it is not good. And there also some problem. That is how to make the teachers exams, I expect that it will be difficult for teachers to control them without any cheating on the exam.
Finally, I think that if the student really want to learn. they will not care if the lesson was online or not. Learning by internet 't has a benefits to us for learning in any time. So, my opinion it has advantages more than the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, so, another thing, for example, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45510835913 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75590144295 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498452012384 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.43151381 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5652173913 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.0434782609 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73913043478 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145227549096 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472311563722 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385474736416 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815923746404 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242339938286 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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