Nowadays the amount of people who live and work in the country that it is not their country it is increase. they went abroad because they want to earn more money or to find job. living in different country has advantages and it has some disadvantage.
one of it's advantages, it is you can have a chance to find a good job and salary so you will have a comfortable life. So, this may be can change your life. For example, I know some people they were did not have enough money to live. After that, they decided to live in foreign country and now they have a work and they live cozily life. they can buy every thing want and their life changed better.
fur there more, you can learn new language. It is easy for you if you want to lean it because you will hear the people in every place speak it. And you will earn new culture and friends. So, your number of friend will rise. it is a positive thing, because make the life easily and funny. So, you will be likely if you meet a good friend.
In the other hand, some people started to feel sad and frustrated especially the people who went alone the will miss their family, friends and their country the will feel frustrated and frustrated. In addition, if they did not know the language of country they will be bored. This thing make them decided to return to their country. So may be they will lose a good chance for their life.
In conclusion, there are a lot of advantages an disadvantages for living abroad. I advice you if you get a marvelous chance to live in another country go and live because may be this will make your life better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27814569536 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19034166208 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437086092715 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9598142777 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208017195615 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800592799272 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114263894152 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162445830408 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121963683246 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 13.0946893788 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 12.4159519038 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 8.58950901804 71% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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