Actually, travel is very frequent to different places, since that flights are much more economical than before, furthermore, exist very means of transport, bus, train, car, boats, etc, which to travel all world at a low-cost, however, also exist means of transport a high cost for the people that major purchasing power.
Therefore, as a result, is easier to travel and to know many places that before were difficult to go. Actually, very person and very family travel at least once for years of vacation to different places and countries.
In the fact, in my case, my family and I, travel each year to different places, mountains, beaches, cold places, and hot places, and always trays do not repeat place. We take decisions based on cost and distance.
However, exist places that actually we would like to travel to, but are very costly or that do not appropriate for my family, because I have a son, he is 3 years old and not always he can enjoy the attraction.
Nevertheless, actually exist very facilities and options for traveling all over the world, this allows us to go very places with much facility and tranquility. For this reason, we can learn from many cultures and enjoy the landscapes, foods, and cultures that we do not know.
On the other hand, technological advances have allowed us the ease of traveling and enjoying the world, with greater ease and lower costs, so we do not have to make so many sacrifices in our lives.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: oprah86
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, at least, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76892430279 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54871117156 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557768924303 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.643018742 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8888888889 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184442150304 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828733004093 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382480715438 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100555486248 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339259935601 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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