These days, it is easier than ever for people to travel to different places. As a result, many locations that used to be free of tourists have now become popular tourist destinations. Do you feel this is a positive or negative development?
In recent years, the number of people who are willing to go around the world that tourism generates is a significant thing for many countries. I think that the tourism industry affects a positive evolution because two reasons are people knowing a lot of different cultures and boost knowledge from travelling and raising the economy of nation countries.
First of all, people can recognize the amount of different cultures comparison to their own country from travelling and increase their knowledge. While people recognize how different about foods, traditional habits, languages, views that can learn a lot of knowledge from it and share with their friends. Comparison to their own countries with different countries can identify the good sides of them and boost themselves, especially the languages. For example, as if people go to Japan, they have to learn the languages of Japanese and their traditional cultures. In Taiwan, the number of temples where people love to visit for some purposes with fruits or cookies, however, there is a different culture in Japan’s temples such as they don’t have to bring something for it. In short, the tourism field can help people learn knowledge and culture through travel.
Secondly, people are increasingly visiting different countries can bring enormous benefits to local people which is an important income for many countries. Many tourists mean increased demand for food, accommodation and services, all of which have created a lot of income and helped local people develop their own businesses for tourists. For example, New Zealand where one of the economic sources is from the tourism industry. Owing to this reason, they designed clear hiking paths and visitor centers in every area in their countries. They also have famous hiking trails and “Hobbiton Movie Set” because the movie “The Lords of The Ring” was shooting scenes in this country. People are willing to visit these places, and it brought the number of earnings from it. For this reason, increasing the tourism field raises the benefits of nation earnings and business.
In conclusion, it is clearly confidently indicated that the grew in the travel industry can affect people who know different civilizations and learn some knowledge through travelling and the growth of earning for local populations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in short, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1966.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29919137466 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65164456433 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490566037736 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8869674154 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.875 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1875 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185836346995 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686014006641 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357705964513 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11949347545 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286231213277 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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