These days it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city Discuss some of the causes of rural depopulation migration from the country to the city and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed

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These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city.
Discuss some of the causes of rural depopulation (migration from the country to the city) and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed.

A growing number of people from rural areas migrate to the civic has become more and more prevalent. In this essay, I will intend to look at the source of this issue and offer some measures for it.
The economic and quality of life are key factors influencing the urge people to move from rural to cities. To begin with, one of the reasons is the economy. Most migrant people move to the city because they wish nothing more than to be adequated employment opportunities to improve their living standards or invest in production. To tackle this problem, the government should have its owns policy of supporting training, creating jobs on the spot, creating stability for the rural worker such as open the factory in rural areas, thereby reducing the pressure on redundant labor in rural areas, creating jobs in general and contributing to the poverty reduction in their home countries.
Another problem that needs to be considered is the quality of life. There is a better life when in the city, where there is the bright light of the city, the education and health systems are developed. The living and working environment in the city is a favorable condition for young migrants to learn many useful things, expand their understanding, improve their skills and strive to achieve their dreams. Furthermore, they can find a decent profession equivalent to their qualification and competence. This problem could be addressed by improving the quality of life of the countryside.
If they could see themself establishing the conditional life, they wouldn’t have wanted to leave their country.
To draw the conclusion, I believe that most of the people in rural areas move to the city for the reasons above. I hope that the government should be to take such measures to reduce migrating.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... establishing the conditional life, they wouldn’t have wanted to leave their coun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, in general, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96666666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70349567947 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543333333333 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.3007196383 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224446739078 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071678195043 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05826360582 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124624972687 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602379880928 0.056905535591 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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