These days it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city Discuss some of the causes of rural depopulation migration from the country to the city and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed Write a

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These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city.
Discuss some of the causes of rural depopulation (migration from the country to the city) and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed.
Write at least 250 words.

A growing number of people from rural areas migrate to the civic has become more and more prevalent. In this essay, I will intend to look at the source of this issue and offer some measures for it.
The economic and quality of life are key factors in fluencing urge people move from rural to cities . To begin with, the cause of the economy, most migrant worker to the city have achieved the goal of finding jobs, increasing income, financially supporting families to improve their living standards or invest in production. To tackle this problem, the government should have its owns policy of supporting training, creating jobs on the spot, creating stability for the rural worker such as open the factory in rural areas, thereby reducing the pressure on redundant labor in rural areas, creating jobs in general and contributing to the poverty reduction in their home countries.
Another problem that needs to be considered is the quality of life. The living and working environment in the city is a favorable condition for young migrants to learn many useful things, expand their understanding, improve their skills and strive to achieve their dreams. Futhermore, They can find a decnt profession equivalent to their qualification and competence. There is a better life when in the city, where there is the bright light of the city, where there are transportation, mass media, where the education and health systems are developed. This problem could be addressed by improving the quality of life of the countryside.
To draw the conclusion,

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, in general, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72856525657 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592156862745 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.549376933 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.454545455 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215093867755 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729250742452 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616611883542 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109502940579 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820732570968 0.056905535591 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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