These days, more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
Recently, there is a trend that nowadays, more fathers tend to work as househusbands while their wives work outside. It is believed that this change is affected by several reasons and whether brings advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly, there are two main reasons to explain why a woman in a family tends to go out to work while the father stays at home and does the whole houseworks. First of all, it could be argued that the gender discrimination is being eliminated in the modern life. In other word, in the past, the women were banned from contributing to any social jobs. However, modern women now play the same role as the men with all the works that from daily houseworks to society's contributions. Another reason is women nowadays are becoming talented, perhaps more than a lot of men. An illustration for this is that some important positions are taken over by women, especially in governments.
Secondly, this development has some impacts on our lives. It is believed that if numbers of women work at the offices, this trend will bring several advantages. The society will be more balanced with the proportion of working men and women. In addition, it will abolish the past wrong viewpoint of women's abilities that they were not able to do any kinds of society's jobs. In contrast, there would be some negative effects of this development. For example, if parents have to work outside, particularly full-time jobs, their children will not be taken care enough. Therefore, they have to hire babysisters in order to look after their children and do houseworks while they are at office hours.
In conclusion, this change described above will be not only positive but also negative development which are the results of a lot of reasons.
- These days, a great number of children prefer spending time on computer games rather than on sports. Why is it a negative or positive development? 73
- These days, more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9222972973 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74653435585 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574324324324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9427705488 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332997190223 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989789461584 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593160624085 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188146697543 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340468630911 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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