These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers
go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a
negative development?
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Nowadays, while more and more mothers like to work outside their houses, fathers tend to watch over their children and do the household choir. Although there are several reasons that relate to this development, I think that it is a positive tendency.
There are some causes why this development more and more common in modern society. Firstly, in present, women tend to open relationship while men like to live with their children, so they just want to stay at home. Secondly, because women have a number of soft and communication skills, lots of companies need more woman than men in their workplace. For example, </span>Vingroup<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> that has more than 50 % of their employees who are women in Vietnam, is one of the most powerful corporation companies. Finally, more and more jobs are creating to attract females, so they can easily find a job and make more money than men.
I think this tendency is a positive development in the present. When women can make more money, they will support family income more stable. Besides, children will make more connection with their fathers and grow more success in their lives if fathers tend to stay at home and take care of children. For example, in the research in 2010, in England, people who had great success in their fields because they lived with their fathers from childhood.
In conclusion, I believe that it has several advantages in this development that fathers stay at home and take care of their children whose mothers tend to go out to work.</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...t has more than 50 % of their employees who are women in Vietnam, is one of the most po...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13793103448 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35644653598 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532567049808 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9492914786 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366194761476 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14830681218 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919762017736 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259227837651 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608381602069 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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