These days more fathers stay at home & take care of therir children.while mothers go out to work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
There are no doubt women are very diligent in their life. They have plethora obligation in our life. Women play a vital role in human being life. There are umpteen reasons behind it. In my point of view, i am fully agree this statment. I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
Gone on the days,nowsdays women are equal participate in all module.Hence women are give the touch competition to the male. I thing, girls have a more responsibiltity in their life. For instance, girls have pethore relation to all the family member. They play the role best to all relation like first she is girl then she is daughter andshe is women and she is wife and least mostly dispensable role is mother and good citizens . I thing, mother is backbone in the family.
Nevertheless, women are strenght in the family. They have alots patience and she do not loose in temper in any situation. Furthermore, mother always time take care in the home.Then,they always time support to the kids and they can be plethore things to their juveniles.Otherwise, mother have umpteen obigation in their life. Least but not the least, mother are more responsibility compare the father. In my opinion, mother have mental strong. I thing,these days more fathers stay at home &take care of their adolescent.Then it is not a big deal. Mother can do it in any obiligation in their life.In my point of view, father have equal duty take care in their children. It is very positive development because it mother have fully right to choose career in their life.
In summarise,after anaysing that issue reckon, it is true, mother is essentail role in their kids life.I thing mother is very close to their pupils. In my opinion, mother stand in their footprints and children have more good effect in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, so, then, for instance, no doubt, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7928802589 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81346731544 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491909385113 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5285127028 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5238095238 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159566530907 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518681012238 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687680830079 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893708381263 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928071812227 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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