These days, people change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages
of this?
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-SG">Nowadays, in many cases, people especially youth are changing their career path in most
often. Some people prefer to work in different working environment and get different kinds of experience, while many argue that this is not always optimal. But, what are the pros of doing this and, what are the drawbacks</span>? <span lang="EN-SG">The aim of this essay is to discuss the advantages of changing career several times in life as well as the unwelcome ones. </span><br></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">Those in favour of this opinion have a number of points to </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">support their point of view. If the workers change their work nature in most </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">often, their productivity will be less and less. It takes at least six months </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">to know about the new position and duties. If we look to the side of employer, she/he </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">may be worried about this type of employees to engage in work. They may think, </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">this kind of staffs will not be stay in the new position for very long and they </span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">feel unwillingness to hire. </span></p><p class="MsoNormal">On the other hand, those who oppose the view mentioned above offer their own points as well. The manufactures who have experience in various sectors can bring the different knowledges and ways of working styles. They can be the mangers and can have various sources because they may have a broaden network. The big network can also support to get another jobs when they quite from present ones. </p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-SG">In conclusion, there are clearly both positive and negative side of switching the jobs most often. While, staying in one workplace makes you more profession in job, many unfavourable things can affect your future. In my opinion, changing the occupations can bring the better opportunities. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1580, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e various sources because they may have a broaden network. The big network can also suppo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, well, while, at least, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in many cases, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.32343234323 5.12529762239 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.66422020381 2.80592935109 202% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597359735974 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2394766822 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.75 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978215124038 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505102140148 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682634552429 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973425600579 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00749623513948 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.38 12.4159519038 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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