These days, people work more than one job, and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
In recent years, the number of people taking up various occupation during their lifetime has been on the upward trend. Although this trend is currently encouraged by positive judgements thanks to its benefits towards workers, its drawbacks should be taken into account.
On the one hand, changing fields of work provides the employees with thorough insights into their potentials. By researching strengths and weaknesses via different working areas, each person can make their own decisions in their career path. In reality, many CEOs around the world took up many sorts of work such as tour guides, waiters, and secretaries before starting their own business. It can be explained that the process of changing careers build human comprehensive skill sets, which later helps them to navigate and develop themselves. Otherwise, many people seem to stick to a sedentary jobs for the whole life without passion and efforts.
On the other hand, changing career is not without downsides since it charges workers the opportunity costs to achieve their goals. First, achievement is traded off by time and efforts, This means that when switching work, people lose time and promotion for their current positions. Second, starting something from scratch like changing working fields often goes along with risks.In reality , challenges coming from failure and rejection often act as a deterrent for people to make decision on occupation changing.
In conclusion, despite the opportunity costs including risks that switching career paths may bring, the precious skillsets and insights gained through this process appear to be meaningful in human life achievement. By acknowledging this feature, taking up many occupation should be voted as a positive breakthrough in human life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4598540146 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68095456048 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63503649635 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9363502022 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27215381525 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932666285937 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401283123183 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145215284692 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598163774813 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.