These days, people change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Some people think that choosing a job early and keeping doing it would provide them with a greater sense of fulfilment, whereas others believe that often changing job would be more likely to have a satisfying career life.
On the one hand, there are several advantages to job hopping. Firstly, by switching from one job to another, people may have chance to try their hands at different fields and thus acquire more skills. Secondly, job hoppers may find a job satisfaction in being able to put the knowledge gained from previous job into practising at new workplace and receiving recognition their capabilities. Moreover, people who change their job more often and experience various environments can discover what suits them best. In fact, many young people dislike the idea of having a steady job or a desk job and the reason is switching job to seek more dynamic opportunities that could later prove more fulfilling.
On the other hand, there are strong reasons why holding down the same job for the long time appeals many adults. First of all, instead of wasting time to change career, people spend time focusing and developing their current job would give them a better job prospects which include promotion opportunities and pay rise. The second one is as experience and dedication are both taken into consideration when a company decide who to promote or to dismiss, those who work longer for organization stand a higher chance of moving up the career ladder and earning more paying living. In addition, there are various perks that follow people who loyal with one job such as sick leave, holiday entitlement, a generous retirement package and yearly bonuses. Besides, they may set up a wide and steady network of partners as well as gain supportive long - term colleagues.
In conclusion, it seems evident that both hopping many jobs or staying the same job have their own unique advantages.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98119122257 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61224393183 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601880877743 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0699135893 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.416666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151102201459 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660778389642 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547798209344 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908759335329 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330546330654 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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