This is an argument topic that people tend to spend more money to purchase tickets for live sport or cultural games rather than before. There are different views about this incident and I think benefits of this event outweigh the drawbacks due to some reasons that I discuss.
Generally, when people attend in a venue to watch a competition, it would be an opportunity for unknown players to exhibit their talents and skills. Furthermore, followers have special role as supporter for competitors that help them to promote their abilities. In addition, this occurrence would be a helpful idea and in-synch with current time. It provides a healthy pastime for society specially adults who are motivated by some negative activities, therefore it could be an inspiration for them.
According to this topic, it would be a profitable approach for government to encourage people to buy more tickets with definite proportion of tax. Hence, the money would be concentrated on repairing sport facilities and centers to advance the merit of physical activities among the people. Besides, watching cultural sports is a novel creativity that motivate people to purchase tickets and enjoy their leisure times. This is a chance to remember and transfer ancient cultural events and customs to the next generations.
In conclusion, as I mentioned that majority of people have paid money recently for tickets, and they really like being at stadiums and some specific places where most of the sport and cultural incidents are happened. Because of positive consequences that they have for society, government and physical atmosphere of country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, hence, if, really, so, therefore, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27692307692 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78541212571 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607692307692 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9683002711 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250603039085 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091562520445 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646455036568 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165634596329 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887893392104 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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