Those who use drugs should be automatically sentenced to time in prison. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowlegde and experience.
One of the most serious social catastrophes in society these days is drug addiction.It is claimed that criminals who take drug ought to be automatically sentenced to time prison. From my perspective, I totally agree with this statement.
To begin with,if a drug addict is sent to prison, he will be strictly rehabilitated. After undergoing a rehabilitation programme, he is likely to rehab.As a result, when he is released from prison, he stands a chance of turning over a new leaf and become a good citizen to make a useful contribution to our society.
Furthermore,by sentencing drug users to prison, we seem to make an example of them.This punishment may make threats of an amount of people who has been using drug.Consequently, the incidence of drug taking is likely to decrease and our quality of life may improve dramatically.
Last but not least,almost criminals are developed from drug addiction.Thus, sending drug users to prison,we will restrict many others catastrophes, such as: burglaries, drug dealing,...
In a nutshell,drug users should be sent to time prison with a view to reducing the incidence of taking drug.If the government strictly punish those lawbreakers,I believe that our civilization will become more and more prosperous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.285 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3999669116 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2840659158 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2857142857 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219544149951 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105365268501 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397671742345 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125381501239 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392537139921 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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