Today food travels thousands of miles before it reaches customers. Why is this so? Is this a positive or negative trend?
In this day and age, food is transported a long distance before meeting its consumers. The reason behind this development is because of the ability for better preservation and efficient transportation of food. Personally, this trend is generally positive despite some minor effect on the environment
Food is often carried on a massive route before being seen on the market’s shelf because of refrigeration and transportation evolutions. Since its introduction, refrigeration has evolved to the point of reaching the optimum as it consumes less energy for more effective cooling, helping preserve food an extended period. Moreover, transportation is now very energy-efficient, being able to carry a lot of goods at a lower cost of fuel. When these two factors align, food can now be carried worldwide, creating the mentioned development
This development’s impacts are favorable for customers and manufacturers while posing some threats to the environment. For customers, food that can not be grown naturally n their nation is now can be consumed, boosting the spending per capita and giving them satis faction. Also, manufacturers can observe a huge spike in demand, allowing them to escalate the production and gaining more profit. However, transportation always increases the worldwide carbon footprint, aproblem that the world has yet to give a solution
To conclude, it is a fascinating world to see food traveling internationally to reach its customers. Although this development may carry the risk of escalating the world’s carbon footprint, it is still positive for multiple reasons. Specifically, people can consume things that would normally be impossible for them, while manufacturers can profit more
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...ers. The reason behind this development is because of the ability for better preservation ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58174904943 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31469534813 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619771863118 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3873206199 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.454545455 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18904071672 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773456835174 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638945227613 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129774766457 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791609765556 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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