Today, more people are traveling than ever before.why is this case?what are the benefits of traveling for a traveler?
In this modern era, due to the advent of technology, a large number of sources of transportation are available in the country than in the past. so, this leads to the increase in the number of travelers moving from one place to another. there are many benefits of the voyage which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. Today, more people are traveling than ever before.
In this materialistic world, people have become busy to earn more and more money and that’s why they feel stress in their life. so, folks travel to certain places of historical interest to refresh themselves. nowadays, it is very easy for the public to go from one place to another because of the availability of air, bus, and railway transportation. some people have to go for business purposes while others go for recreation and to relax from the stressful life. even foreign countries give easy visitor visas which give chance to passengers not only to visit there but know about their culture also. Today, more people are traveling than ever before. why is this case?
There are a number of benefits for a passenger. this plays an important role in his social development because he gets a chance to meet the people of different states and nations. moreover, it is helpful in flourishing the business because employers get an easy access to their business partners for their official matters. it also gives chance to spend time with families and take relief from their daily busy schedule. it is a source of knowledge also and many institutions arrange trips for their students. it gives chance to the people to know about their vast traditions and culture which becomes helpful in their education. it enhances bonding between different cultures. Today, more people are traveling than ever before. why is this case?
In conclusion, traveling has become a passion for many people because they love to travel for enjoyment in various places. traveling must be informational and the credit goes to the technology which makes the life of travelers pleasurable. Today, more people are traveling than ever before. why is this case?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49096385542 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.60446787114 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515060240964 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0398962916 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9473684211 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57894736842 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.522246828415 0.244688304435 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181927936906 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148891904175 0.0667982634062 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.390540283743 0.151304729494 258% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144442296985 0.056905535591 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.