today more people are travelling than ever before.
why is this case?
what are the benefits of travelingfor travelers
This days, the modern societies more fascinating to visit many regions, then mostly of them tend to explore the wonderful tourism attractions over the world. Furthermore, the exhaustion of working in the same place regularly is the main cause some people go to travel. As the result, looking for new experience is major advantage of doing some trips.
Staying on the similar room and undertaking the same activities everyday is annoyed think. At the same time, the physic of human requires some rest especially for brain in other having a capability to build the greater quality for job later. A happier feeling because of holiday can increasingly develop their focus that is always bothered by thought of some interesting trip. Recently, the are several wonderful destinations had build for visitors who really want to enjoy the other fresh atmosphere.
Going to travel in variety of regions or even abroad has become a huge dream by most workers because they can gain some fresh impression such as tasting the different kind of traditional foods, the diversity of cultures, and so on. In addition, doing the engrossed trip is avaiable recharging energy level of personal which can offer joyful feelings in the daily ordinary life. As the result, the rate of stress because of the bored job can be decreased.
To summary, avoiding the rank of fuss is the main point of undertaking a trip to the diversity locations. Eventually, the visitors will not only cut their tiredness but also acquire something new in their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
This days, the modern societies more fascina...
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Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...oom and undertaking the same activities everyday is annoyed think. At the same time, the...
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Line 2, column 387, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ght of some interesting trip. Recently, the are several wonderful destinations had buil...
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Line 2, column 430, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'builded', 'built'.
Suggestion: builded; built
... are several wonderful destinations had build for visitors who really want to enjoy t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, really, so, then, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0157480315 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66793220224 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645669291339 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7724035211 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0604966845702 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0197945501623 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378872575984 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0365136620192 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455682467705 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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