some people think that parents should teach chidren how to be a good member of society. others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
discuss both these views and give your opinion.
There are many ways to shape great behaviour of somebody. Several think school is the best place for it, while others assume that it is wrong perception. In my point of view, making a nice personality of children should be started by their first environment which is their family.
School is one of formal education that can give some new knowledge for pupil. However, it can not give the deeper lessons about behaviour and even personality. Generally speaking, school just tend to offer the sure knowledge such as science, math, and many more. It is rarely deliver an instruction for being an ideal member of society. There are a couple of smart children who have the cheesy character because their parents do not share enough affection to them due to the business. In addition, formal school used to put only attention to their brains without caring of their habituates.
On the other hand, parents are the crucial role for youth society. A kind mother grows up her child with full affection will create the soft character person not only to their family but also to others generally. Furthermore, well treating from family, either mother-father or even brother-sister can make the youths feel more confident in everywhere they are. They can teach throughout showing their children how to respect others and even elders even though the unknown people.
To summary, although school provide variety of complete facilities, it is not making sure that the character of pupils can be led. In spite of family should be the first teacher who can teach a great behaviour for their children to create a nice generation that can be useful for both their relatives and country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'delivered'.
Suggestion: delivered
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Line 2, column 358, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...member of society. There are a couple of smart children who have the cheesy chara...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, so, well, while, in addition, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93617021277 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54436021921 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59219858156 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9282439041 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153022646077 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527690088279 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359128767183 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966681415018 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308649516321 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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