Today more people are travelling than ever before .why is is this case? what are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
Many persons are passionate about travelling. Thesedays, the number of people who travel has been increased. This essay will look into the reasons for the rise in travelling as well as the advantages that a traveller gets from traveling.
To begin with, since, the availability of tour packages at a reasonable price range attract many people to do travel. This is to say, in this competitive world, many travel agents offers many exciting packages which can be affordable to the people belonging to various financial status. Developing countries like India, is an ideal example in this context, where 60 percentage of Indian people now prefer to travel abroad whereas it was only about 30 percentage in the past years. Hence availability and affordability of tour packages when compared to past creates a lot of people to do travel.
Besides, there are numerous advantages for travellers as a result of travelling. Firstly, people get a lot of opportunity to understand the tradition and cultural values of new places. For instances, in country like India marriage is celebrate in different ways with respect to the place they are actually belong. As a result, a traveller gets an opportunity how the customs and traditions are differ place to place. Secondly, acquisition of new language. This is to say, language is needed for easy communication and it can be easy to learn and understand new language if the person travels a lot. Thirdly, travelling provides a chance for the travellers to gain valuable experience throughout their life. Therefore, there are a lot of positive attributes related to traveling.
In conclusion, all the travel requires a hand full amount of money, but the experience that a travel can bring to a traveller is enormous and it has many benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08163265306 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93321942656 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6086845608 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8125 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376848299192 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131100137726 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936577334303 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260983097519 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260251250794 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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