Fever artist ever manage to achieve Fame, let alone a livable ways often after struggle to make ends meet for most of their lives. for this reason, some people believe that it is irresponsible for a parent to encourage their child to pursue artistic career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is a view among certain section of people that due to lack of money and actors gain as a source of income, parents are not at all encouraging their children to choose a career as an artist. However, I disagree with this view and argue that children need to develop their innate ability to achieve success in life.
It is true to certain extent that, lack of publicity of an artistic work resulted in less popularity of artists and hence, they didn't get any adequate money for living. This is to say that, thesedays, if, people are not earning well, it is very difficult for them to run a family. As a matter of fact, many artists works on not popular will not get an adequate amount of money and they often struggled to make ends meet for the living that's a few people famous the view that artist are not paid well for their works.
Despite the above said, it is unfair for a parent to discourage a child from choosing an artistic career. This is to say, being an artist is not an easy task it requires innate talent as well as creative abilities. To be specific, if, a child understand his potential in Arts and the parents told them the right path and undoubtedly the person would become an asset of the future as well as for the nation. Many famous artists, for example, Kanayi Kunjiraman, a famous sculpturist, who born in a poor family but his parents understand is potential at an early age and provided him good training in arts and he now becomes a well known artist earning hand full amount of money for his works. Therefore,it is unfair for a parent to discourage their children from pursuing their challenge merely based on income.
In conclusion, although, a few artist got little notice in public, it is unresonable that parents to discourage their children in pursuing art career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, as for, for example, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58895705521 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47118970873 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515337423313 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4418811736 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6363636364 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32434803708 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137139801441 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636612401871 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190854920908 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584106892626 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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