Compared with a few decades ago, toy we are witness to a higher rate of youth graduated, however, school leavers often are unemployment. It is argued that the main causes of this are the lack of technical skills and the preference to pursue tertiary education. To tackle these issues, educational related solutions will be analyzed.
Firstly, the reason for most young graduated who are not meet their job need, is due to the poor studying performance. In other words, a myriad of the taught subject is theoretical at school while companies are more likely to employ workers who have pragmatic experiences and need no training. Secondly, jobless graduated is also owing to the tendency of youth to pursue tertiary education with a view of the acquiting higher-income profession. As a result, this can be made imbalance between white and blue-collar workers. In Iran, for example, a myriad of youths taking Ph.D. degree to get a high salary or official work.
There are two effective solutions to the problems of young jobless graduated. One way to counter this is to learning technical skills and work as an apprenticeship at companies. By doing this, it will help them to secure a stable job more easily than studying advanced academic knowledge in vain. Another method of dealing with unemployed who left schools is the strick entrance university exam. This solution would hopefully prevent the young generation from taking higher education levels to drive enormous benefits such as high salary or official works.
In conclusion, today most school leavers can not find a job. This economical problem, however, grave it may seem, is not without solutions if the pragmatic skills are proved at schools and the entrance university exam would become harder.
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Suggestion:
...to get a high salary or official work. There are two effective solutions to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12847222222 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75430840603 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2047265177 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188490024296 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628312840688 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691590709563 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119211630854 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507231014616 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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