In modern epoch the global phenomenon of urbanisation from the beginning of indrustilisation to present day has brought opportunity and prosperity albeit at a cost in quality life.With the surging of citie population complexity chalanges also surges.
Therefore,the quality of life decreasing paradoxically wealth endowed to metropolitan centres.urban cities offers numerous opportunities which turns to increase attractiveness essentially they are trapped in the positive reinforce cycle. However,quality of life dropped in cities due to extremely high rate of property,overcrowded sourroundings,uncontrolled population growth.Moreover, increase vulnerability to terrist attacks.Another noticeable thing is that , health hazards caused by pollution at alarming rate in cities.
No doubt this is critical issue not neglatable consedring the solutions first and for most,greater investment to enhance facilities likewise,good public transportation facilities,health care facilities as well as improve living standard with provide good accommodations.Moreover decrease pollution for well being of society as they adopted more active lifestyle to work.After that,government should reduce high rate of property.In addition maintain cleanliness of environment with adequate disposable of trash and drainage system but also,improve connectivity with construction of roads. Besides,proper security for society welfare for instance instalation of cctv for secure society from crime and terrorist attacks.
In the epilogue,a wealthy city increase attraction to cities which increase pressure on infrastructure and security.umpteen solution to migrate this drawbaks but nevetherless definitie solution has yet to be found.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.60619469027 5.12529762239 129% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.15158915629 2.80592935109 148% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70796460177 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.642399343 49.4020404114 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 248.833333333 106.682146367 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.6666666667 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 21.3333333333 7.06120827912 302% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12075154755 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654618978808 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486617988655 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082256193713 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055485809655 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.5 13.0946893788 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.38 50.2224549098 -17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 21.65 12.4159519038 174% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.53 8.58950901804 146% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 24.5 9.78957915832 250% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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