In school students are taught literature, mathematics, science, history and many such subjects but what about the lessons related to real world? When students complete there gradutation they find themselfs helpless and inexperienced when they encounter the real competative world. I totally agree to the idea of adding the subjects which teach students how to financially survive in todays world and reasons for the same are discussed in the following paragraphs.
To initiate with, many educators believe that a seperate hour should be allocated in school which includes topics related to life lessons. This will however help the student to indulge in the competative world when they growup. Along with this children will be able to tackle problems related to finance with great ease. For instance, student who immigrate to different countries likely face issues related to financial management. To mitigate this problem potential subjects such as finance management is suppose to be added in school curriculum.
Secondly, finance management will also help to secure furture. For example, investment in policies assists for the betterment of their life in their old age. Students might aslo learn to organaize their expenditures and save more.
To summerize, to tackle the outside world school should educate students how to survive financially with full confidence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5355450237 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74038583355 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601895734597 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4245920046 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327240314108 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109144948704 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879401907654 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199092894686 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085636711116 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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