In today s world of advanced science and technology many still greatly value artists such as musicians painters and writers What can the arts tell us about life that science cannot

As has been known that people worship art and artists. In this contemporary era where computers, scientific imventions, vast technology has superseded a lot. Numerous people still appreciate artists like painters, authors, singers and musicians. Here, I will elaborate the importance of art in human life over science.

To commence with, the fact that science assist people to lead a factual life however art connects people to their roots, culture. Moreover, this is the prominent source to attain peace in this haste- paste world life. For instance, masses as a haptic schedule and heavy workload at their workplaces but it is always noted that this pressure, stress can only be dwindled by listening music going to art galleries to watch paintings. Apart from this, mostly people are habitual to read books at night which aids them to have a sound sleep.

Probing further, music, paintings, books usually manifest cultural incidents, mythological knowledge. Consequently these are the source to teach wards about their history, traditions. In addition to this people considered artists as a special child of God. Therefore, people have respect for them. Furthermore, science unfolds the cause of everything by proving facts and statistics which sometimes reduced the interest of masses in respective thing. The reason is that people always want a fantasy and hallucinated life and paintings,music, books are sheerly successful in that.

To conclude from above confabulation it is axiomatic that painters and artists plays a pivital role in individuals life because of their contribution to protect culture and history through their arts and also assists to attain peace in stressful life.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, apart from, for instance, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41886792453 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82576761609 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645283018868 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.4831706216 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146830438575 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045415381436 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318089613084 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909362549364 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016590101108 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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