In today’s world of advanced science and technology, many still greatly value artists such as musicians, painters and writers.
What can the arts tell us about life that science cannot?
Science and technology has been advanced in modern world. However, the demand of experts in musics, paintings and authors are still escalating. In this essay explain regarding the importance of arts in peoples life over science in terms of emotional, psychological and medical concerns.
Advanced science and innovative technology become inevitable in today's world, which would make life more easier, fast and smooth. Likewise, it may give virtual reality, advancement in medical and pharmacological developments, leisure and entertainment programmes and so on. Whereas, these technical services might be insufficient in peoples personal and inner pleasure needs. Apparently, such technology would minimise the pressure and longtime goals in handful within a time but, it may not be fullfill the inner necessity.
On the other hand, artists can mitigate the stress, work pressure,and sometimes which would make health benefits and remedies for certain disorders.For instance, many people use music therapy for their treatment purpose, which would give them diversion to their inner conflicts and get rid of diseases. Paintings and some writings are used to assess oneself even if they are in higher positions, what science could not do to the people. For example Mr Paulo Coelho a famous author is an inspiration to many youngsters to overcome life time difficulties, although they are in technically qualified.
Put in a nutshell, how fast the development in science and technology, the sense of arts is irreplaceable in peoples mind. Everyone needs a relief and feeling of happiness in life which science not entered areas. People are lives in both emotional and scientific World which must be balanced in either way like arts and other artistic abilities.
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apparently, but, however, if, likewise, may, regarding, so, still, whereas, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47619047619 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94329581344 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6336996337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.34593069 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250823922543 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909749137572 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735389427502 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151980154012 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462733539924 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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