In today s world many people spend increasingly less time in their homes What are the reasons for this What are the effects of this trend on individuals and society

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2757.0 1615.20841683 171% => OK
No of words: 480.0 315.596192385 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74375 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.93039206325 2.80592935109 140% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49375 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 820.8 506.74238477 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 2.10420841683 523% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 120.0 20.2975951904 591% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 295.002012705 49.4020404114 597% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 689.25 106.682146367 646% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 120.0 20.7667163134 578% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.5 7.06120827912 304% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 72.0 5.01903807615 1435% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310730463586 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216560235341 0.084324248473 257% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314540819083 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216560235341 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314540819083 0.056905535591 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 65.6 13.0946893788 501% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -58.78 50.2224549098 -117% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.1 7.44779559118 297% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 51.3 11.3001002004 454% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.2 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.37 8.58950901804 156% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 50.0 10.1190380762 494% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.