Today, some young people say that their mobile phones are the most important thing they own. Do you think that popularity of mobile phones is good or bad thing?
Mobile phones today have gained increasing popularity in the society, even become the most necessary item to some young individuals. In my perspective, this trend has more perks than its drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are many undeniable disadvantages of the rising preference of youngsters on cell phones that should be taken into consideration. Firstly, spending too much of time on this kind of smart devices could make people encounter to some serious mental and physical problems. It is due to the fact that individuals using phones with inappropriate self-control are likely to immerse themselves in virtual world and neglect to interact with people around, which might cause them suffer from social isolation or depression. It is not to mention, a person who is addicted to phone for playing video game or surfing social medial could face many sedentary lifestyle related illness, such as diabetes and obesity. Besides, being distracted by mobiles may absolutely decrease the working productivity and study outcome of people.
on the other hand, I suppose the advancement and convenience of mobile phones nowadays is truly beneficial for personal development. Smart phones enable users to approach huge amount of knowledge in the Internet regardless of where they are and when it is, within just a few minutes. Thanks to that, student could easily access websites to follow any online courses they are into, even in buses or parks. In addition, mobile phones has been updated lots of helpful features and applications, which greatly rises people's quality standard. For example, smart banking is definitely an important application that almost all install in their phone, helping them transfer money and make payment fast.
In conclusion, mobile phone plays an significant role in modern life as it provide loads of advantages. However, people also should be aware of its detrimental impact if it is used improperly.
- Many young people say that mobile phones are the most important object that they own Does the popularity of mobile phones among young people have more advantages or disadvantages 89
- Today some young people say that their mobile phones are the most important thing they own Do you think that popularity of mobile phones is good or bad thing 89
- Many young people say that mobile phones are the most important object that they own Does the popularity of mobile phones among young people have more advantages or disadvantages 85
- Today some young people say that their mobile phones are the most important thing they own Do you think that popularity of mobile phones is good or bad thing 89
- Today some young people say that their mobile phones are the most important thing they own Do you think that popularity of mobile phones is good or bad thing 56
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Suggestion: On
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, for example, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.332247557 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8219562856 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687296416938 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6152762729 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.923076923 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265606880523 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820863581911 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705561188232 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156972165228 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448964317783 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.