Today, some young people say that their mobile phones are the most important thing they own. Do you think that popularity of mobile phones is good or bad thing?
The advancement of technology has developed the way of living, such as technology is smart phones. However, a few youth claims that this device has brought many advantages to living. From my point of view, it has more drawbacks than merits. This essay will discuss how this technology brings more demerits than benefits.
On the one hand, at present, mobile phones have opened an easy communication way. This is a type of device which can assist people to use Social Media to connect to the world, as well as making phone calls on the internet. This certainly helps people to keep in touch with their distant relatives, friends and family members. Additionally, doing any kind of professional work is possible with this spectacular gadget, for instance, Microsoft word software is used for creating documents which can be installed on a device. Moreover, this tool provides getting everyday’s news updates through news portal.
On the other hand, although, the technology gives human many advantages, the disadvantages have more effect on young children. These days, the young generation tends to addict to mobiles because they think that it is more prominent assets they have despite the side effects. Unfortunately, a survey result has shown that, people who use mobile more than average hours are suffering many health issues, namely, hearing loss, vision problem, headache, even though brain damages.
In conclusion, in spite of the numerous benefits, it is responsible for health hazard; nevertheless, youngsters find it entertaining and vital for their lives. In my opinion, there should be some restrictions for using the phones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 560, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e. Moreover, this tool provides getting everyday’s news updates through news portal. On...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27480916031 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76866766827 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667938931298 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7211313792 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130675433163 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404713908585 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464579040903 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667310994877 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509771464881 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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