Today, there is insufficient respect to the elderly by the younger individuals. What do you think are the reasons? What are its effects to the society?
Nowadays, there are younger people who fail to respect the elderly. There are many reasons for such actions and its effects to the society are quite growing.
One of the reasons that younger individuals are being disrespectful to the elderly is that they are wrongly influenced by their peers, especially in the school. In addition, the lack of teaching of good manners and right conduct is also a contributing factor. Another thing is that parents or the elderlies are being busy to make a living, in which they fail to give their children enough attention. They often spend less time with their children as they will leave them to the caretaker because they are busy working. Moreover, there is a law that interferes with how they discipline their children, it is the anti-child abuse law. As a result, younger people tend to become abusive of their privileges and they are using it as an excuse to their misconduct. Not to mention that there are also elderlies that are too lenient with their children and it strongly affects the upbringing of the youngsters in a negative way.
The younger individuals’ misbehaviors have negative effects to the society. Since these children are being disrespectful, most of them fail to finish their studies and some are not able to correct their bad behaviors and still manifest it as they grow old. Furthermore, such manners lead them to the wrong path thus most of them cannot find a decent job. Meanwhile, their frustrations lead them to commit disobedience to the government’s rules and regulations. Some of them also engaged in loitering, vandalism, destruction of public properties and road rage, to name a few. In addition, as a result of rebellion from their parents, they run away, get involved in illegal drugs and commit crimes.
In conclusion, disrespectful younger individuals tend to have a miserable and directionless lives. In fact, they often become a burden to their families and a disgrace to the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, thus, while, another thing, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0303030303 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88252389154 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3436410727 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106657419788 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470186561982 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636620230477 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093924600981 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715702061955 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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