Today TV channels show more men’s sports than women’s sports. Why is the case? Should TV channels give equal time for women’s sports and men’s sports ?
From distant past to present day, men’s sports tend to have a more coverage than women’s sports on TV channels. This situation leads to some conception about gender inequality. Frankly, I am of the opinion that the coverage of women’s sports and men’s sports should be equal for some particular reasons.
The fact is that men’s sports are more renowned than women’s sports. Therefore, the broadcasters must show more of the former in demand of their financial profits. They have to keep themselves updated about the trend and customer insight to provide the most suitable programs for their viewers. For instance, SEAGAME 2019 was broadcasted on many Vietnamese channels, as it was the male football team who competed. Another explanation for this difference about the coverage is that men is usually much better than women at physical strength. Hence, they can engage in almost every field of sport and also join the more intense one like boxing. The more intense these sports are, the more exciting the viewers are. That could justify for why the broadcasters air more men’s sport than women’s sports.
Nevertheless, it is considered that the television station should let me men’s sports and women’s sports be in equal coverage due to gender equality. If women’s sports have not been as popular as men’s one, they should be encouraged to engage in more fields. Both women and men make every effort to do their best in sport, so people should appreciate that effort by broadcasting those sports at the same coverage in recognition of their attempt. It might also help women’s sport to be more reputable in the future. Women’s sports seem to gain more attention these days, so it is worthy to invest more in them.
On the whole, men’s sports are now somehow more recognized than women’s sports mainly because of their physical strength and the assumption about sport. However, TV channels should provide equal time for them to ascertain gender equality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and the assumption about sport. However, TV channels should provide equal time fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, frankly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10397553517 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55132026604 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519877675841 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7207130382 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7222222222 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.604332725887 0.244688304435 247% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220181152561 0.084324248473 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139612069348 0.0667982634062 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.436983560694 0.151304729494 289% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650062777337 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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