Today, TV channels show more men's sports than women's sports. Why is this the case? Should TV channels give equal time for women's sport and men's sport?
These days, there is a significant difference between men and
women’s sports coverage on television. I believe that women’s sport
should get just as much coverage as men’s, and will outline my
reasons in the following essay.
To begin with, there are many reasons for the dominance of men
sports programs on television. Due to a large proportion of sports
viewers being male, television channels tend to broadcast mens
sports programs to maximize their ratings and profits. Take football
as an example. Inside a coffee shop, it is common to see a group of
young men discussing a recent men’s football match, while women
show a greater preference for discussing other topics like shopping
or celebrity gossip. Additionally, because men are usually physically
more stronger and faster than women, they tend to play at a much
higher level , which makes men’s sports much more exciting to
watch.
However, I am of the opinion that it is necessary for television
channels to provide equal sports coverage of both genders . Firstly,
it helps to create gender equality in society and increases the
participation rate of women in sport. Every time women go out onto
the field, they give it their all knowing that their best will likely go
unnoticed, and therefore just like men, female athletes should receive
full recognition for their effort. Secondly, better media coverage
also enables women to make money from endorsements which
improves their income. That is to say, more television exposure for
the female players will lead to major deals with endorsers and higher
salaries in the future through advertising contracts.
In conclusion, why women’s sports shows do not receive enough
coverage in this day and age results from the aforementioned reasons,
and I truly believe that it is necessary to ensure equal coverage of
women’s sports
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34666666667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68560806527 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6412585179 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.384615385 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 28.0 4.38176352705 639% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473984761195 0.244688304435 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167489344562 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915868193071 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103822048837 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101451293718 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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