There has been a remarkable increase in the number of professionals who move to abroad to work in better living conditions. These immigrations can lead to many problems but steps can definitely be taken to tackle these problems.
Admittedly, there are two main serious negative consequences of these issues such as shortage of public services and likely economic crises. Firstly, poor countries would become poorer if they lose their citizens who have advanced academic education. One good illustration of this, most Indian engineer today would like to immigrate either Canada or the United States due to their own countries’ low living conditions. Thus, India became an undeveloped country owing to these migrations. Secondly, due to the lack of skilled professionals such as teachers, doctors or academicians value of the local currency will decrease. Hence, the government should be prudent concerning the brain-drain and they ought to take prevents for these bad aspects.
On the other hand, there are a variety of possible solutions for problems of lack of public services and economic situation. Advanced quality opportunities should are provided for people who have academic skill. After decades of speculation, today majority of ministries of the economy have fairly accurate information concerning the preventing brain-drain, for instance, governments should allocate subsidiaries for doctors and teachers. In addition to this, Immigration of skilled people is prevented thanks to sustainable regulations.
To sum up, most ability people in poor countries today want that living and working in a developed country. However, these ideas might be perilous in an undeveloped country. Authorities and citizens ought to be prudent about the brain-drain.
- some people think that competitive sports should be included as a subject inschool while others believe that it has negative effect on children.Discuss both the view and give your opinion. 61
- some people think that competitive sports should be included as a subject inschool while others believe that it has negative effect on children.Discuss both the view and give your opinion. 73
- People are less fit and active nowadays than in the past. What are the reasons for this? What measures can be taken to fix this? 73
- Some psychologists think that the best way to overcome the stress of everyday life is to spend a portion of the day doing absolutely nothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people say modern children s games do not develop a wide range of skills while traditional games can be much better for developing such skills To what extent do you agree or disagree 77
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64419475655 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0516784064 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614232209738 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9172606882 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.466666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152225557234 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480502821527 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311487463365 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893009558209 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295177162193 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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