People have different views about providing their personal information to online websites for different daily purposes. Even though it appears to be more advantageous to the users, this trend has some serious drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why people believe that updating personal data online facilitates a superior experience. Firstly, it would be convenient for customers to online purchase and pay the bill with just one click. This is clearly exemplified when people shop on e-commerce platforms such as Shopee or Tiki. Because their identifying information has already been synchronized by the first registration, they can save time to make a transaction. Secondly, the data can be recalled by the user anytime even if he forgets it. It would be beneficial for a person who has numerous passwords and change them periodically.
On the other hand, I believe that putting one's personal information has been detrimental for his property and mental. The main reason for believing this is that the users are potentially susceptible to criminal activities. The private information shared online including one's name, addresses or social security numbers can be exploited, so theft can easily break into that person's house. Moreover, the telephone number is publicized, one can be constantly bothered by unwanted call or message ads from telesales offering goods or services. This not only disturbs the recipient's job but also causes unnecessary irritation affecting work productivity.
In conclusion, although it might be more positive for people to buy online and remind them, I prefer that associating personal details with accounts has potential risks from cybercrime or spam messages. Given this situation, it is recommended that governments should establish privacy regulations for online shopping firms so as to mitigate security risks.
- Nowadays there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Topic many people put their personal information online address telephone number and so on for purposes such as signing up for social networks or online banking Is this a positive or negative development 84
- Some scientists believe that in the future computers will be more intelligence than human beings While some see this as a positive development other worry about the consequences Discuss both views and give your opinions 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 323, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...y regulations for online shopping firms so as to mitigate security risks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48958333333 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96256666006 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652777777778 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1479911244 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328847966976 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100547713685 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607491287815 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200947750549 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184809627203 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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