TOPIC: More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve the problem?
Associated with environment pollution, the increasing number of wild animals on the brink of extinction has become alarming as never before. This essay will discuss several causes and suggest some solutions to tackle this problem.
There are several reasons for this issue. To begin with, human activities are worth mentioned as the first and foremost factor lengthening endangered list. It cannot be denied that with the booming development of industry, illegal hunt for the purpose of economy and commerce has been pushing wild animals to the limit. Futhermore, environmental problem which partly stems from human activities must also be responsible for the disappearance of a variety of species. Air and water pollution turned the natural habitat into an insecure and deprived place to survive. Additionally, shrinking natural area due to forest fire and deforestation restrict living space of creatures. Last but not least, natural disasters such as drought, flood and earthquake bring the death of significant amount of wild species each year.
Followed these above causes, measures to tackle this problem are presented below. There is no doubt that human impact is the key factor contributing to make the situation worse. Therefore, raising awareness of people is the wisest and most sustainable solution in this urgent circumstance. For example, in order to conveying the message of saving animals from being killed for their furs to meet the demand of fashion industry, the campaign should be launched to encourage people to use artificial-furred products. Besides, it is accountable for government to take measures to protect wild animal from dying out. The laws must be introduced and the policies must be applied to prevent illegal actions.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are several reasons resulting in prolonging endangered list. However, it is my firm conviction that if steps are implemented efficiently, our globe still remains a safe and worth-living place for both human and creatures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4253968254 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89843182247 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625396825397 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3885968353 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.529411765 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226037577142 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671735089201 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470125301271 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1283210433 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248869824883 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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