Topic: Nowadays, people are using too many sugar-based drinks. What are the causes of this case and how to reduce it?
In this day and age, the consumption of sweetened beverages has soared in recent years. The primary contributors to this tendency and some efficient measures to minimize it will be discussed in this essay.
There are several principal causes of this adverse trend. First and foremost, beverage companies have tended to focus more on their purchasers’ tastes. As a consequence, they have made an array/a myriad of delicious drinks so that they have been likely to attract numerous consumers. Furthermore, sugar-loaded beverages contain additives like caffeine such as Coca-Cola, Red bull, and so on. These substances give an immediate energy boost, allowing users to stay alert and maintain high concentration on their job and studies. However, such energy drinks pose a number of health threats accompanied by excessive sugar consumption.
A variety of measures has to be taken to handle this alarming issue. To begin with, the government should impose a significant tax on beverage companies generating sugar-dominant drinks so that the price of their products will increase which results in lower consumption and less sugar-sweetened beverages consumption amongst customers. Moreover, the authority should raise citizens ‘awareness about this detrimental problem via the internet, television, poster, and so on. They can also prohibit advertisements from beverage companies on TV channels, media. Instead, programs featuring the potential health risks of sugar-sweetened drinks should be broadcasted in order to broaden consumers' awareness. These actions will have a dramatic influence on this negative trend.
Taking everything into consideration, the popularity of sweetened beverages is mostly due to advertising and excessive addictive properties, and the government should take serious measures to put an end to this harmful proclivity.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, as to, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75547445255 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1758389287 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63503649635 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3926709186 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124747295182 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453221965493 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327147007766 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737026468202 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283840914437 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.