Topic: The only way to improve road safety is to much stricter punishment on driving offenses.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that implementing strict laws towards driving offenses is a sole way of bolstering up road safety. I partly agree with this statement and I believe that there might be another ways which are more plausible.
On the one hand,imposing strict punishments may act as a deterrent,so rebellious drivers will think twice before committing offenses. In fact,motoring offenses are crimes ,so the full weight of the law should be applied in implementing tough punishments such as non-custodial sentences ,harsh penalties or heavy fines. Apart from that, the letter of the law should be imposed strictly to careless drivers and who drives while intoxicated. Because ,the risk level of dangers like putting hurdles to actions of road-users or endangering the life of innocent lives is exorbitantly high in these drivers. Therefore , implementing harsh penalties should be high on the agenda in order to improve road safety.
On the other hand,being tough on motoring offenses is not the only way of enhancing the safety,but , there would be another measures which are well-known with their high efficacy. Installation of speed cameras is an epitomic example to this and it is concerned as "cost-effective" measure by many authorities. Speed cameras spur drivers to adhere to speed limits,as a result, they save the life of many people. In addition,traffic calming measures are next salient way of eschewing road disasters. Raised build-up areas oblige careless drivers to obey speed rules ,consequently,provide safety for both pedestrians and drivers.
In conclusion, implementing strict punishments towards the people who drive with negligence would be useful in some cases,but I believe that there are another ways which are more compatible as well as cumulative .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46014492754 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36635663353 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7870893226 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.923076923 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1538461538 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156480015119 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557697929332 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390449120103 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101063954062 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319114090715 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.