Topic: Some people say patriotism is the biggest cause of war. But others believe that people are patriotic, they are more likely to take an interest in a country's day to day running and therefore less likely to allow unscrupulous politicians to drive a country to war. To what extent to you agree or disagree?
A long held belief is that the seed of patriotism might be the prominent occasion of war. However, other people said that It is mainly the patriotism that helps fend off the possibility of carrying out a war driven by a group of nerefarious politicians. While I have sympathy for the former, It is my firm belief that the breed of patriotism would no doubt avert the high- risk of a deally war.
On the one hand, there is no denying that the patriotism could be the far-reaching cause of a potential war Which would lead to the tangible manifestation of the public's fervent love for their own country. It is a matter of fact people view countries as their beloved houses where family members have cemented a robush bonding over a long period of time. Therefore, once the national interest is under the louming threat, it is high time for the patritism and the individual pride in their our countries to unite citizens together to step up for the prevention of any major enemy' s aggressive actions.
However, there has been little doubt for the fact that the patriotism at times prove of tremendous importance to stave off any risk of wars provoked by unscrupulous politicians. The patriotism has in fact been cultivated by the enormous gratitude for those Who sacrified tirelessly for the national independence & freedom. Therefore, the fervent love has been a stark reminder for the whole society to treasure the peace time and as well as to be fully aware of untold havoc wrought by a dealy war. Once any nefarious politician attempt to make ill use of patriotism to provoke a war, citizens of a country which fought vigorously by all means to claim independence would be on a high aleart to not be triggered by any adverse political motives.
In short, my perspective is that the patriotic people in some cases might be the potential cause to drive their countries to the edge of a war. However, the invaluable importance of living in peace time has no doubt taught the public to be vigiliant in all cases to avoid being thrown into a vicious circle of dealy wars and hatred.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in fact, in short, no doubt, as well as, in all cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70218579235 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71876171145 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508196721311 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.5437200473 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.416666667 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171195274398 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755777416863 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560154638878 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116967891873 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268322281481 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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