Topic: The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use cars?
With no doubt, using cars brings us a number of benefits of our life. However, that breeds a number of unexpectable drawbacks. To cope with these challenges, we have to suggest accurate solution.
Actualy, enormous use of cars leads to some problems. Firstly, the pollution cars exhaust contributes to acid rain, carbon dioxide, especially global warming, damaging our helth. Secontly, we usually prefer driving cars than walking or driving cycle. It result in the traffic jams making us feel uncomfortable. An other problem is safety. Every year, car accidents breed huge numbers of casulties.
These disavantages have adverse impact on people's lives. However, suggesting impose to a strict restriction on the use of cars is not the best option. Because that by using cars, we can go to somewhere easy and comfortable and if we do that, we will have a decline in car industry. Moreovers, traffic jams and safety can be solve by some different ways such as having more underground parking garage and educating and educating drives and pedestrians about obeying traffic jams seriously.
Although discouraging people to use cars is easy way, it is most unlikely to be a permanent cure. We had better not spoil the ship for half-penny-worth of tax.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'results'?
Suggestion: results
... cars than walking or driving cycle. It result in the traffic jams making us feel unco...
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Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: Another
...ffic jams making us feel uncomfortable. An other problem is safety. Every year, car acci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12195121951 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88154397109 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673170731707 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4576128496 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279447632118 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898035948491 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829994577735 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163246053657 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413669549303 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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